A Fantastic Poetry

I just remembered about my mid-test that was held last two days..
Introduction to Literature subject..
There were two task in that test..
Task 1 is about analyzing a poetry, the poetry was about the message from soldiers that wanted to be remembered even they have died..
Yet I am much more interested in the second Task..

The direction for task was The lecturer gives the students 2 different clues ( differ for girls and boys)..
The clues are stories about someone's feeling when they face a problem. from the clue, the students are expected to make their own poetry which will represent what their feel.. The poetry should have rhythm..

So, for girls, the clue or the story was (If I'm not mistaken):
You had a male friend. You never met him in person, but you shared everything each other.
You communicated through sms and facebook.
Then, after two months, he asked you to be his girlfriend and you said yes.
Since that time you sent message each other from 6 am - very late..
In school you had Volley ball club, but he didn't like it.
It made you broke up with him, but you still communicated with him.
You cried at school, at boarding house, on the bus, at home, in the class.
You love him, but one day he told you that he was in love with another girl.
Then, you realized, he made you cried, he played you..
Over and over........................

THIS IS THE POETRY I MADE FOR THE TEST
(It made me laugh whenever I read it again..
Actually, it should be a sad poetry of broken heart girl.
To me, it is so silly for I created it only in 7 minutes)
Whatever, Let's check it out..

"POISON ME"

We used to share everything
Through words, I told you
I never hide anything
That's because, I love you

Two months have gone
No meeting, No dating
You ask me to be the one
I said yes without doubting

We were happy
Our love was lovely

Then, a turbulence
Broke our love in glance
You were still there
You made me cry everywhere

Shut up!
Don't blame the volley
Speak up!
You love another lady

You have done it well
Poison me like the hell

Hahahahaha,
What do you think?
Am I a good poet?